| Deviant Login | Shop | Join deviantART for FREE  |
Take the Tour  |
#Chibi-Group
#XxKawaiiArtistsxX
#OC-Corner
#Kawaii-cute-art
#CutieKawaii-Club
#Kikiyo-Fans
#TheFantasticFive
| Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Drawings | ©2012-2013 *Tokyo-Dollie |
The Journal Portal
Browse Journals |
Polls |
deviantART [dee·vee·un'nt·ART]
Keep in Touch!
|
Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
|
Sta.sh
Her big bow is cute, but a little awkward looking. I think that adding some more folds and shading would make it look more realistic! Also, the color of the bow runs together with the color of her undershirt, so I would add more shading to the pink to make the bow and the shirt stand out from each other.
I love her hair, but I think you could make more strands to give it more definition. Doesn't have to be many!
The last thing that I will say for now is that overall, she needs some more shading. Where her bum is touching the ground should be a darker color than the rest of her skin, and the same goes for the skin that is somewhat covered by her bangs.
I think this is a great start, and I hope to see more from you
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.