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Kikiyo by Tokyo-Dollie Kikiyo by Tokyo-Dollie
OK OK enough with he rating me if its fair or not..
Just comment!!
And I will Upgrade this picture as soon as POSSIBLE!

Critique by BombPrincess Dec 4, 2012, 7:36:30 AM
Very cute! I definitely think that you're on the right track. Your anatomy is decent, and the pose is nice. There are just a few things that you could do to make this piece even better.
Her big bow is cute, but a little awkward looking. I think that adding some more folds and shading would make it look more realistic! Also, the color of the bow runs together with the color of her undershirt, so I would add more shading to the pink to make the bow and the shirt stand out from each other.
I love her hair, but I think you could make more strands to give it more definition. Doesn't have to be many!
The last thing that I will say for now is that overall, she needs some more shading. Where her bum is touching the ground should be a darker color than the rest of her skin, and the same goes for the skin that is somewhat covered by her bangs.
I think this is a great start, and I hope to see more from you :) She is a very cute character!
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Wasteandwanting Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
London, France, and very cute.
Tokyo-Dollie Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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